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Rae Lynn Sommers's avatar

Simple but not simplistic. Haiku is deceptively difficult to do well.

Reminiscent of Williams Carlos Williams, The Red Wheelbarrow.

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Tree Langdon's avatar

Thanks Rae Lynn, I often struggle with simplicity when I write longer poems. That's when I remind myself to edit ... mercilessly.

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Claire Kelly's avatar

Love this!!

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Tracy Mansolillo's avatar

Beautiful (and the photo too). Where was this taken

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Tree Langdon's avatar

Thanks Tracy, the photo isn’t one of mine, so I’m not sure.

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