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Agnes Laurens's avatar

What a beautiful poem. Love this poetry form.

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Tree Langdon's avatar

Thanks Agnes. I've created a Pantoum challenge if you want to join in!

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Tim Stowell's avatar

Thank for exposing me to the Pantoum poetry style.

This poem is terrifyingly beautiful and insightful.

You are an inspiration.

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Tree Langdon's avatar

Thanks Tim. I'm so glad you liked it

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June Kirri's avatar

"Learn to reconcile the struggle in your narratives." How so true is this.

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Tree Langdon's avatar

That's wonderful feedback. I loved this line too. Join us for the Pantoum challenge next week . ❤️

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Tree Langdon's avatar

Here it is! You can write a Pantoum (they're really fun) and then post it in Chat as a free subscriber.

https://wordsinmotion.substack.com/p/pantoum-poetry-challenge

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